Monday, November 7, 2011
thesis statement
slums affect people by getting them sick , creates a very limmited space , and cause death .
final draft
Carolina perez 
Ms.jaeger 
World geography  
Slums 
Poverty is common through out india. India has plenty of population that are in poverty .
People in india try to look for places to live everyday . slums are their only choice for a 
place to live in . slums are very unhealthy and un sanitary . yet slums attract lots of people 
from india to live in slums . slums affect people by  getting them sick , having very limited 
space , and also it causes death . 
people get ill by being in contact with filthy things ; mostly from living an unhealthy life 
style. In india slums ae defined as being very filthy and destroyed . since slums are very 
over crowded , there is so much trash every that its hard for people to travel from place 
to place . in result  .this causes people to get sick . slums affect people in a negative way.
Having very limited space is a rough challenge to face . slums are very overcrowded , and 
cause people to live in very tight spaces . people are in search of finding somewhere to 
live , since slums are there only choice , it increases more and more in population size .
once being overcrowded with people , there is an urge of leaving but cant . 
death is one of the most things that is a result from slums. Living in a unhealthy place and
 getting sick will result into death . its not hard to get sick from living in a slum. This 
causes a negative impact on someones life , if living in a slum . once people die more and
 more people come and try to take there place from where they use to live .
in conclusion , people that live in slums are affected by getting sick , having very limited 
space and deaths . these main facts are going on everyday in india.
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