1.introduction
a.poverty is very common in india.
b. poverty is the result of famillies that dont have jobs and dont have homes.
c slums impact people in a negative way. slums are unhealthy , over crowded and make people live in a bad way .
2. body paragraph 1
a. therefore , slums are very unhealthy for people to live in .
b.so much trash are in slums and cause illnesses.
c. quote , explanation.
3.body paragraph 3 in addition slums are very over crowded .
a slums have many people living in them , that when people want to live in them they cant .
b.many people living in them , "quote"
c.explanation.
4. body paragraph 4 - slums cause people to be protictive bc of the way people are there.
a. gangs that are living in slums
b quote
cexplantion
concluion.
Carolina, you needed to actually type out the quotes, explanations, and transitions.
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